Tuesday, 6 May 2014

The Wrong Place at the Wrong Time

Today's post is the other of the two stories I wrote when I was 16 (& can be clearly dated by the filmstar reference). It was intended to demonstrate just how quickly and just how dramatically life can change when you least expect it.

The Wrong Place At The Wrong Time

The bell rang and the pupils of Wetherton High School surged out of the double doors at the front of the old stone building. Lucy let out a great sigh of relief.
“God, I thought old Woods would never shut up!” Emma, her friend, smiled at Lucy’s outburst. Lucy went on, “I couldn’t believe it when he tried to give me detention! Who does he think he is?!”
“He thinks he’s the teacher, Luce” Emma said, grinning broadly. 
“Yeah, well,” Lucy said, “He had absolutely no right to do that! He was totally out of order!” 
Emma shrugged. “Whatever.” she said.

The glass disintegrated and a clothed arm shot through. A gloved hand wrenched the lock out of its socket. The doors clicked and swung open. The suspension groaned as it was forcibly burdened by four foreign bodies. The steering lock was ripped away. Wires flashed and the engine roared. The gear-stick was slammed into fifth and the accelerator was ground into the floor. The tyres screeched as they gyrated against the tarmac before getting a grip on the road and speeding off into the distance.

“I mean, how can one man set so much homework!” Lucy continued, as the two of them walked down Charleston Road towards the High Street. “It’s so unfair!  Doesn’t he think we have social lives?”
Emma sniggered.
“Oh, it’s all right for you!” Lucy said, turning on her, “Fido! You’re a proper little teacher’s pet, aren’t you?”
“What do you mean?” Emma asked.
“I have to do six whole pages of notes,” Lucy said, “And what do you get? Three measly questions!”
Emma giggled again. “It’s not my fault. I wasn’t the one that was drawing cartoons in my exercise book or doing imitations behind his back.  Darth Grader!  Honestly.”
“He is!” Lucy said, indignantly, “He’s Darth Vader’s cousin.  I’m telling you.
Straight out of  Star Wars!”
“In a tweed jacket?”
“It’s obviously a disguise. He can’t walk around in a long black cloak and mask or he’d be locked up in the loony bin. So he has to disguise himself as an average human being.”
“Yeah, sure,” Emma said, nonchalantly.

The car swerved from one side of the road to the other, rebounding off the pavement or the kerb. It thundered down a back lane, jarring on each loose stone. It ploughed through a row of dustbins, mimicking the intoxication of its drivers. The lids clattered and rolled about in its wake. Lights of houses flashed on and windows shot up, just in time to see the dust settle on the beaten track and hear the growling and rumbling fade away as the car continued its destructive journey, never decreasing in speed.

Lucy and Emma reached the end of Charleston Road and began to walk down the High Street towards the zebra crossing. They had finished their argument about Mr. Woods’ private life and were discussing their favourite celebrities. 
“Christian Slater!” Lucy said, “Why on earth do you like him?”
Emma blushed and shrugged. “I don’t know.” she said, “Who do you like then?”
“Ben Affleck.” Lucy said, decisively.
Emma looked surprised. “I thought you’d say Leonardo DiCaprio.” she said.
“Him too,” Lucy added quickly.
“I like Jack Ryder.”
“And him!” Lucy gabbled.
“Tom Cruise.”
“And him.”
“Chris O’Donnell.”
“And him.”
“Michael Caine.”
“And hi…hey!”
Emma grinned.
“You fancy Michael Caine?”
“No!” Emma said, “I just think he’s a good actor.”
“Oh.”
“Don’t you?”
Lucy thought about this for a moment. “Don’t know,” she shrugged. “Haven’t really seen him in anything.”
Emma looked horrified at the thought of this. “You mean… you’ve never seen  ‘The Italian Job’?’
“The what?”
“Or ‘Jekyll and  Hyde’?”
“Is he in that?”
“Or...or…`The Muppet’s Christmas Carol?”
“Oh, I’ve seen that.” Lucy said, “What part does he play in that?”
“The main part!”
There was a pause.
“Oh.” Lucy said and she pushed the `wait’ button at the zebra crossing.

The joyriders reached the end of the back road and tore down a side street, getting closer and closer to the centre of town. The car weaved carelessly in and out of the lines of traffic - careering round to the left of a crossroads - Only the quick thinking of the other drivers prevented an accident. The drunkards had unintentionally turned into a dead end. A precarious U-turn was performed and they hurtled back down the cul-de-sac, did another perilous left turn and hurtled off down the High Street.

Lucy and Emma were still standing at the zebra crossing. Emma had decided to end the discussion about Michael Caine’s illustrious career and they now stood in silence. Then Lucy said “You know what?  I can prove the existence of Martians.”
Emma turned to stare at her. “You can’t.” she said.
Lucy smiled smugly. 
“Can you?”
“Just you wait.” Lucy said mysteriously.
The traffic lights changed from green and Lucy pointed up to where the red `Don’t Walk’ man had been replaced by a green one.
“There you go,” Lucy said, a cheeky grin on her face, “Little green men.” She laughed and stepped out into the road.

The youths raced down the wide road dodging thoughtlessly in and out of any gaps they found - changing lanes from the left to the right and sometimes the middle. Advancing down the street, well over the speed limit - with the driver’s foot still jammed on the accelerator pedal. A black and white line appeared on the tarmac at the same time as a young girl materialised in front of them. The car couldn’t, or wouldn’t, stop and the bonnet slammed into the girl’s chest, scooping her up into the air. Her body bounced across the windscreen before falling in a shapeless heap in the middle of the road.  Still not relenting, the car vanished off down the road, leaving utter chaos behind it.

Emma had seen the car a split second before it crashed into Lucy. She had screamed out loud as her friend’s body had been bent in half before being lifted up and over the car front. She had stood watching helplessly as Lucy was thrown onto the cold, rough ground.  The massive bang of the collision had thundered in Emma’s head like a volcano erupting and the hollow thuds as she bounced across the bonnet had become a thunderstorm. Now she stared down at the pile of flesh that was her best friend. Lucy had landed awkwardly and now lay motionless on her front. Her head was turned to the left and her face was streaked with blood. Her left hand was up by her face but her right arm was twisted grotesquely behind her. Someone moved forwards to the crumpled figure and bent over her, checking for a pulse. They called out to the gathering crowd for someone to phone for an ambulance. A mobile phone was whipped out and 999 was hurriedly dialled. Emma was only half-aware of these events. She was staring down at the girl, who lay still and stiff, in the middle of the High Street. In the distance, she heard the wail of a siren, getting closer and closer.
Emma heard the commotion in the back of her mind but paid it no attention. The ambulance pulled up and the paramedics got out. Emma didn’t take her eyes off her Lucy. No matter how much it pained her to see the state her friend was in. She watched as Lucy was elevated onto a stretcher which, in turn, was lifted up into the ambulance. Emma was then helped up beside her and sat on the bench staring blankly at Lucy as the paramedics busied themselves around her. Emma yearned to reach out and grasp Lucy’s hand in her own. She wanted to comfort Lucy, tell her not to worry. She wanted to laugh and joke with her, to get some response from the statue-like figure in front of her. But it was as if Emma’s own muscles had seized up. She couldn’t move. All she could do was sit and look.

The ambulance pulled up in front of Wetherton General  Hospital and the doors were flung open. Lucy was wheeled out and up the ramp at the front of the A&E Department. Emma followed, slowly and serenely. Lucy was sent straight into ‘Resus’ and Emma was directed to the relatives’ room. She sat stiffly in one of the armchairs, her hands in her lap, her eyes staring right ahead of her, looking at nothing in particular. She sat listening to the steady ticking of the clock on the wall. Although she wasn’t saying anything, millions of thoughts were flashing through her mind. She kept playing the accident over and over again.
“What if?” she found herself thinking, “What if we’d waited? What if we’d come out of school just a few minutes later? What if I’d seen the car sooner? What if I’d warned Lucy earlier? Is it my fault the car crashed into her? Is it my fault she’s like that?”

In the room down the corridor, Lucy lay on a resuscitation trolley with wires leading across and into her body. Doctors and nurses worked frantically around her, desperately screaming instructions to each other, feeding more and more drugs into her bloodstream. Lucy lay oblivious to all that was happening around her. Deaf, dumb and blind to the world. Beside her the regular beep of the monitor measuring her heartbeat gradually slowed, before culminating in a single, monotonous tone… HosHo