Tuesday, 9 September 2014

A Soldier's Tale

This month's entry is a little late but then laptops have no sense of time and are prone to break down at the most inopportune moments.
Anyway, it's a short entry which again focuses on 'glorious' war - this time in commemoration of the second declaration of world war in 1939 - and was penned at school under the brief of using a paragraph to capture the perspective of a soldier.


A Soldier’s Tale

We’ve been through hell for our King and country – six months of disease and exhaustion. Look at it. Mud, rats and lice – it all gets to you, particularly the lice. God, what a mess. We’ve got to get away from this, we need rest, we’re so exhausted. The Germans can keep their shells, we don’t want them. Some of my mates look even worse than me. They’re staggering everywhere, like they’ve had one too many – blind, deaf and dumb. Some of them have lost their boots – what a thing to do in a place like this. Uh-oh here come the gas shells. Watch out lads! Got to get my mask on! Done it! Oh no, Johnny’s too slow. Ugh, I can’t look, it’s…it’s…disgusting! Thank God, the gas is thicker, now I can’t see him. Wait a minute I can’t see anyone else now. I’m lost, in a cloud of green. Oh at last, I can see someone. Oh no – it’s Johnny! God he looks awful. He’s on his knees now. He’s going to die. I know he is. I’ve got him in my arms now. It’s hard to hold onto him. He won’t stop moving. I feel sick. How about you? Just look at his face – green, distorted, rotten. And he’s still alive. Do you still think death’s glorious – even if it’s patriotic? More like psychotic. God, what a mess.